My favourite place is Korina´s House and she is my sister.
Today I am going to be using desciption words.
When I go to Korina´s house I smell food on the stove steaming.
I feel groovy when i get to play on the Ps4. It looks small in the outside but big in the inside.
Feels like Paradise when I go there and the cat is Smooth.
hi its SHADE i like your favourite place. My favourite is a motel because it feels like paradise too. You can also get nice foods there like you get at your sisters house
Kia ora Ruavai TJ here your favorite place is amazing I wish if I was in that house. That looks so cool to me in that house but you chose a good house hope you had a good day at school good job bye now.
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I like your favourite place that house is cool by bailey and keep it up.
ReplyDeletehi its SHADE i like your favourite place. My favourite is a motel because it feels like paradise too. You can also get nice foods there like you get at your sisters house
ReplyDeleteKia ora Ruavai TJ here your favorite place is amazing I wish if I was in that house. That looks so cool to me in that house but you chose a good house hope you had a good day at school good job bye now.
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