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Monday, July 3, 2017


Should Fidget Spinners Be Allowed?  
      

Against
How?
They are really fun to play with  “How”  they are fun to play with. Because they spin that’s all they like the cool ones.
How do they make the teachers yell. They make to much noise when you spin it round and round. They make the Teachers yell because they make to much noise that is annoying. Sounds that come from the fidget spinners are to loud and annoying.

Reason 1 They take your mind off your learning.
Reason 2 Wastes your parents money for like one small thing.
Reason 3 Wastes the teachers time and they have to yell.
Why?
How do they take your mind of your learning?
So like when you drop them they make noise.
How do they waste your parents money
Just for one small thing?
Because they are little and when they fall they are quiet when u drop them. They are really small to lose.
MOST INPORTANT REASON
Is that if people leave there fidget spinner on their computer. Someone might take it.
If you are angry at the teacher you can play with it.
From Ruavai






1 comment:

  1. Great start on your Persuasive Writing, Ruavai. I can tell you that I agree with all your points here! Especially where they take your mind off learning.. aren't they just so distracting!! A thought for next time, give your story and introduction and conclusion where you tell the readers your opinion. You could begin using paragraphs too!

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