My Ski trip writing

Once upon a time there was an mountain called Mt. hut  there was a school that went to mount hut to go skiing they were afraid but. They got used to it and they all had skis and they had. To do there lessons and they had lots of fun there because they loved the snow. especially going down they loved going down it was very awesome for them they enjoyed the lessons. That they  learnt then they went Down but not a deep one they had to go down a boring one. But once there was a pro  and his name was shikarn. He was smiling when  he went down and then he was having a race with 3 other people there name was danri kaunteya and rory they were. Racing shikarn they were laughing! Then they did not see the green light. So shikarn went down and beat them and he started giggling and then he fell in a  bunch of snow he was trying to get out aut and he kept on going down. Unto he was hungry so he stopped then they were coming. down the hill Once upon a time there was an mountain called Mt. hut  there was a school that went to mount hut to go skiing they were afraid but. They got used to it and they all had skis and they had. To do there lessons and they had lots of fun there because they loved the snow. especially going down they loved going down it was very awesome for them they enjoyed the lessons. That they  learnt then they went Down but not a deep one they had to go down a boring one. But once there was a pro  and his name was shikarn. He was smiling when  he went down and then he was having a race with 3 other people there name was danri kaunteya and rory they were. Racing shikarn they were the same people that were laughing at him he was eating a energy. Bar he was not that hungry any. More because he was skiing and eating some hot subway. And he had a big apple juice he couldn't hold so he put it. .in his jacket pocket it was really big but there were. three drink bottles and it was. Making him slow then he was almost at the end but then he dropped it and the crowd. Was shouting and. it gave him a head  ake he and made him hit the snow and he was almost about to faint  and he was waken up by the crowd and they were past him and he caught up. With them and shikarn won!!!. And started to drink his apple juice and started to  drink and the bullys came last they crashed into each other and got stuck in the snow for a while then they came last so dani was Second kounteya was third. Then the pro at skiing went home everybody was lol and dani did. Lots of skids on his friend kaunteya dani kept on putting snow on his face. And then shikarn went back home he sit. Down on a couch and turned the TV straight on and. Put the news on and the news said. Good evening today we have breaking news the pro shikarn is getting better and better this is the  news hub. Now this is the part when he  got excited it’s when he. Can see him doing lots of tricks that was the part when he went to the kitchen and eat he heard. The news hub say that they want him to vs noah he was hard for him so he agreed. So he was back. And he was in. a longer map were it  had turns and loops so he was on TV and his kids were watching him he was so hungry. And he had no food when it was almost about to start. And then the news hub said he is so hungry he has nothing to eat. Then his mum herd it so she rushed down the hill around the mountain.