Plums
Today we had a very exiting meeting with mr Mitchell, Mr Mitchell explained what we are going to do so he asked for some good Looking, strong, intelligent. so he choose Ethan, Evan, and Me but then Ethan stood up a and said that I wasn't good looking. then mr Mitchell told Ethan to sit down and Kody replaced him so mr Mitchell took us down to his car and got the tools and ladder. for the plums we took a walk down to the garden and picked some plums with mr Tisches class. we got ten kilos of plums then we were talking about making plum jam or plum sauce. but I thought about jelly doughnuts This is the end of my writing I hope you enjoyed what we went through.
Hi Ruavai, it's Kareem from Gilberthorpe School.
ReplyDeleteNice post, I like how you have used adjectives and used many words. When Ethan said you weren't good looking, that was mean. You got 10 kilos of plums? That's a lot, you could add paragraphs or colour next time.
Hi Kian here by the way I really like your blog but maybe next time you could tell us how to make it but it is still pretty cool.
ReplyDeleteHi kareem it was fun doing it we got to make some jam but instead I was day dreaming of jelly doughnuts wish you both the best Kina and kareem peace out and don't cause to much trouble ok see ya😑
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