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Friday, February 3, 2017

New year

Yesterday we started schooland i was in tawa. And there is new people in my class and the same old seinors. Me chrysler kevin rory and bailey first mr c.  Introuduct him self and then did the role and then we had to go nextdoor. And had a hui talkingabout all the thingswe need to know. And then went back in the class room and drawed and drawed the it was the end of the day.
Today today we said the karikiaand did handwriting and then it was. Morning tea and wewent outside and played and then when the bell rang the old. Ones we had to go in inside and then miss morgan came.And said does you class want to do bloging.onlythe ones that hadno togs.

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3 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 24, 2017 at 10:31 AM

    cool!!!!!!!

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  2. Lee-Anne WahoMarch 31, 2017 at 10:32 AM

    Kia ora Ruavai.
    I am just having a look through older posts to see how we have improved in our Writing and blogging skills. What do you think of the quality of this post compared to what you can do now. (It is March now).

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  3. AnonymousMarch 31, 2017 at 10:43 AM

    G'day Ruavai
    This is Milan from Rimu, now this is a really good re-count about the the first day of school. I have some complaints that you have put too much capitals with the font and that you put too much (and) in the sentence. Maybe you could put exclamation marks when you are saying more things instead of (and). Plus you should check on the post to see any mistakes before you publish. Hope this helps you.

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