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Wednesday, November 2, 2016

My Trip to dunedin

On Friday I was leaving and I was going to dunedin for two days first we had to pack up. I had to pack up my bag clothes food and blanket then it started. to rain and my dad was in the garage and grabbed his fishing rod then put it in the boot. I was in the cars waiting then my mum told me to go and grab her charger so i did and she was waiting in the van. then we left before we were going to go we went to the cafe  FOR BREAKFAST we all had a muffin to hot choclate  and 9 pancakes  syrup and butter with a fork and a knife then we left we get to play on my cousins  Apple IPAD we were watching a movie on it. it was quite cool anyway so when we had to stop my mum was checking if anyone wanted to go toilet so we stopped at rakaia. that's when we had breakfast again we had a nutri grain bar water and a wrap with ham and cheese then we took off then we went to ashburton and we had mcdonalds we had 2 packs of hot cakes fanta drink and a  happy meal i didn't like it at all. then we saw my naenae coming my two little cousins were in the boot  eating so we took them jireh and ezra my brothers went at the back i had to sit with them in the middle they were looking out the window it was cool we saw the huges bridge and then we turned again when the rain stopped. to see who needs to go toilet and have lunch we had CHICKEN SANDWIDGES CHIPS AND WATER we played for a while  then we went back into the van and went to the gas station we got some lollies we all got two big packets of lollies and a big bottle of juice. we all enjoyed then when we were up to this high way it said dunedin

3 comments:

  1. Fantastic job ruavai its good

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  2. but some of your work haves no full stops

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  3. Hi mate it did not make sens sorry. i like your story from
    ethan

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